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 on: October 27, 2009, 02:52:46 am 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
Kits are really easy! They don't require that much!

    Name: Rainkit
    Age: Three moons
    Gender: She-cat
    Clan: ThunderClan
    Rank: Kit
    M/C: No
    Kin: None that she knows of
    Description:
Very small, medium grey, blue eyes

    Personality:
She hasn't settled in to it yet.

    History:
Born in ThunderClan, her parents were killed by ShadowClan, raised my medicine cat.

    Roleplay example:
Rainkit moved her front paw.

    Other:
No.
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Good example:

    Name: Firekit
    Age: Three moons
    Gender: She-cat
    Clan: ShadowClan
    Rank: Kit
    M/C: No
    Kin: None that she knows of
    Description:
Firekit is a small cat, even for a kit, almost looking too small to become a warrior, but she is still a very capable fighter. She is very thin, abnormally so, that her shoulder blades, ribs and back all show very obviously. Her eyes are bright green and her pelt is quite dark, mottled ginger, fading to black at her points.

    Personality:
When she is kind, she is just that. Despite her small size, she is very cocky and commanding. She knows what’s right and what’s wrong, and would kill any cat that disobeyed the warrior code. She knows, however, that she does go overboard being irritable, and is trying to calm down. She never wants to have kits, as she prefers to fight than to stay in the camp. She’s a very able fighter.

Unlike most ShadowClan cats, Firepaw cares very deeply about upholding and protecting the warrior code, and would quickly make it known if any cat in ShadowClan were to disobey it, and would make sure they got driven off ShadowClan territory forever.


    History:
Firekit was born to two loving parents, along with another kit. She was very small, and the Medicine Cat feared for her life, but, even at her age, she was the dominant kit

    Roleplay example:


    Other:
No

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 on: October 26, 2009, 02:03:56 pm 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
BAD EXAMPLE:

    Name: Rainpaw
    Age: 6 moons
    Gender: She-cat
    Clan: ThunderClan
    Mentor: Shadowstream
    Rank: Apprentice
    M/C: No
    Kin: None
    Description:
Small, dark grey, blue eyes.

    Personality:
She hasn't really settled in to it yet.

    History:
Born in ThunderClan, her parents were killed by ShadowClan, raised my medicine cat.

    Roleplay example:
Rainpaw pounced on the mouse.

    Other:
No

SOMETHING ON THE PERSONALITY!!!:
I cannot believe that some people really put that! You have a personality from the moment you're born, for heaven's sake! I like writing personalities!
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    Name: Firepaw
    Age: 6 moons
    Gender: She-cat
    Clan: ShadowClan
    Mentor: Rabbitclaw
    Rank: Apprentice
    M/C: No
    Kin: None
    Description:
Firepaw is a small cat, almost looking too small to be a warrior, but she is still a very capable fighter. She is very thin, abnormally so, that her shoulder blades, ribs and back all show very obviously. Her eyes are bright green and her pelt is quite dark, mottled ginger, fading to black at her points. Her ears have several rips and cuts in them, and she has a scar across her forehead, and one over her eye. Her right front leg is slightly crooked, as it broke but didn’t heal properly. Her tail in long and slim and she is very muscular, despite not looking it. She has very sharp claws and teeth, and is not afraid to use them.

    Personality:
Firepaw often helps the queens look after their kits, and sometimes points out to a young warrior if they are doing something wrong. When she is kind, she is just that. Despite her small size, she is very cocky and commanding. She knows what’s right and what’s wrong, and would kill any cat that disobeyed the warrior code. She knows, however, that she does go overboard being irritable, and is trying to calm down. She never wants to have kits, as she prefers to fight than to stay in the camp. She’s a very able fighter.

Unlike most ShadowClan cats, Firepaw cares very deeply about upholding and protecting the warrior code, and would quickly make it known if any cat in ShadowClan were to disobey it, and would make sure they got driven off ShadowClan territory forever.

    History:
As a kit, Fireshadow had a dull life, up until both her parents died when she was three Moons old. She was irate at this, to say the least, yet she lived with it. She was cared for by the Medicine Cat up until her Apprenticeship, when she became Firepaw. Her Mentor was a good-natured she-cat called Rabbitclaw, who has since passed away. She still misses Rabbitclaw very much, although she knows if she follows the Warrior Code, she will someday join her mentor in StarClan.

Firepaw was always a capable fighter, using any method possible to defeat her enemy, unless, of course, it was outside the Warrior Code. Rabbitclaw was very careful to teach her Apprentice not to kill any cat, unless in self-defense or if the cat was outside the Warrior Code. She never showed any mercy to her opponents, even if they were inside the Warrior Code, particularly if they were of ThunderClan, as she never was quite able to forget the stories about the days of the four ‘great leaders,’ Firestar, Leopardstar, Tallstar and Tigerstar, and swore to avenge Tigerstar’s death. (What she had not been told, however, was that Scourge killed Tigerstar.)

    Roleplay example:


    Other:
No

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 on: October 26, 2009, 06:05:11 am 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
OH MY GOSH! Dark-san is SO annoyed. I've been looking back over a few Warriors RP's on DCF, and I can't believer how bad some of the apps are! Here is Dark-san's idea. I've taken a minute out of doing nothing and written some example Bios, just so you can see what good and bad bios should look like. Also:
Every time you post a one-liner or short bio, this kitten gets scared.

This is just so those of you who are determined to write the shortest bios in the world can be shocked in to good bios. Our bad example is going to be called Rainpool. She took me about a minute to write. and her Prefix is going to be used with an assortment of suffixes.

BAD EXAMPLE WARRIOR:

    Name: Rainpool
    Age: 17 Moons
    Gender: She-cat
    Clan: ThunderClan
    Apprentice: None
    Rank: Warrior
    M/C: None
    Kin: Doesn't know
    Description:
Dark grey, blue eyes.

    Personality:
Cheeky, good natured.

    History:
Born in ThunderClan, her parents were killed by ShadowClan.

    Roleplay example:
Rainpool looked at the skinny ginger She-cat.

    Other:
No

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Now that you've seen that, hows about I show you Fireshadow, who is a good example for an Lit/Advanced RPer and took me quite a while to write.

Name: Fireshadow. (Fire because she has bright ginger fur, Shadow because it's quite dark, and that it fades to black at the points.)
Age: 33 Moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: ShadowClan
Apprentice: Searching…
Rank: Warrior.
Mate/Crush: Toadpelt. Definitely.
Kin: She doesn’t know, and doesn’t really want to.

Description:
Fireshadow is a small cat, almost looking too small to be a warrior, but she is still a very capable fighter. She is very thin, abnormally so, that her shoulder blades, ribs and back all show very obviously. Her eyes are bright green and her pelt is quite dark, mottled ginger, fading to black at her points. Her ears have several rips and cuts in them, and she has a scar across her forehead, and one over her eye. Her right front leg is slightly crooked, as it broke but didn’t heal properly. Her tail in long and slim and she is very muscular, despite not looking it. She has very sharp claws and teeth, and is not afraid to use them. One of her ears is split straight down from the tip to the root, giving her the appearance of having three ears, and scaring quite a few kits. As she ages, she knows that her pelt will dim and that her muscles will become weaker, but she ignores this, and focuses on now.

Personality:
Fireshadow is sarcastic, unkind and bad-tempered usually, although she can be kind. She often helps the queens look after their kits, and sometimes points out to a young warrior if they are doing something wrong. When she is kind, she is just that. She thinks very highly of Toadpelt, although she would obviously never admit this, and, despite her small size, she is very cocky and commanding. She knows what’s right and what’s wrong, and would kill any cat that disobeyed the warrior code. She knows, however, that she does go overboard being irritable, and is trying to calm down. She never wants to have kits, as she prefers to fight than to stay in the camp. She’s a very able fighter.

Unlike most ShadowClan cats, Fireshadow cares very deeply about upholding and protecting the warrior code, and would quickly make it known if any cat in ShadowClan were to disobey it, and would make sure they got driven off ShadowClan territory forever.

History:
As a kit, Fireshadow had a dull life, up until both her parents died when she was three Moons old. She was irate at this, to say the least, yet she lived with it. She was cared for by the Medicine Cat up until her Apprenticeship, when she became Firepaw. Her Mentor was a good-natured she-cat called Rabbitclaw, who has since passed away. She still misses Rabbitclaw very much, although she knows if she follows the Warrior Code, she will someday join her mentor in StarClan.

Firepaw was always a capable fighter, using any method possible to defeat her enemy, unless, of course, it was outside the Warrior Code. Rabbitclaw was very careful to teach her Apprentice not to kill any cat, unless in self-defence or if the cat was outside the Warrior Code. She never showed any mercy to her opponents, even if they were inside the Warrior Code, particularly if they were of ThunderClan, as she never was quite able to forget the stories about the days of the four ‘great leaders,’ Firestar, Leopardstar, Tallstar and Tigerstar, and swore to avenge Tigerstar’s death. (What she had not been told, however, was that Scourge killed Tigerstar.)

When she was twelve Moons old, ThunderClan warriors broke in to the camp and killed several warriors, Rabbitclaw included. Backed in to a corner with only a six-moon-old Apprentice, Swiftpaw, she was faced with two strong warriors. To avenge Rabbitclaw’s death, she fought these two warriors off while protecting Swiftpaw, who was too terrified to fight. After this fight, she was made a Warrior by Sparrowstar, then the leader.

For a while, life was very dull, until one day. Fireshadow discovered a plot of her leader's to disobey StarClan and attack ThunderClan at a gathering. Both she and Swiftpaw, then Swftstorm, were very worried, so they went to ThunderClan camp to warn them. Following this, a huge fight broke out, in which Fireshadow and Swiftstorm did not participate, and StarClan were angered. Fireshadow went to see the Medicine Cat, who told her that StarClan would not be calm again until a truce was made.

During the night, Fireshadow and Swiftstorm met in secret with a group of StarClan-fearing ThunderClan cats, hoping to form a truce. ThunderClan agreed, and ShadowClan were invited to come to Mothermouth to form an allegiance, to which they grudgingly agreed. Thanks to Swiftstorm and Fireshadow's noble actions, StarClan were calm once again, but Swiftstorm was driven off ShadowClan territory and still lives as a Rogue.

When she was given her first apprentice, Darkpaw, the first thing she did was to make sure her charge always obeyed the Warrior Code. However, during a huge fight with WindClan, her apprentice was badly wounded, but he pulled through, thanks to the efforts of the Medicine Cat.

Roleplay example:

Other: She'd like an Apprentice...

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And Bloodfang, who is great for a Semi-Lit app.


    Name: Bloodfang
    Age: 30 Moons
    Gender: She-cat
    Clan: ShadowClan
    Apprentice: None
    Rank: Med. cat
    M/C: Isn't allowed one.
    Kin: Doesn't know.

    Description:
She is small and lithe, with bright red eyes, claws that won't retract and canine teeth that are over her bottom lip. She has one ripped ear, and a dog's tooth through the other. Her pelt is white, speckled with red around her mouth. After fights, there is invariably blood all over her face and muzzle, which was how she got her name. No-one really knows why she is Medicine Cat. She has black bracelets with dog’s teeth around her front paws.

    Personality:
She has no respect for StarClan or the Warrior Code, so how she came to be medicine cat shouldn't have happened, really.

She's evil. She's also knowledgeable, but mostly evil. She secretly wants to kill the rest of her clan so that she alone can rule. She's very dominating, small yet fierce, with exceptionally long, fierce teeth and claws. She is a skilled fighter and happy to kill. She does have a kinder side to her personality, and her dream is to find her family. She often dreams about them.

    History:
Bloodfang is and always was a fighter. From when she was a Kit, she always got in to fights, so was exiled from her original Clan at six Moons. She then went to ShadowClan, who happily accepted her for her fighting streak. She bribed the leader of ShadowClan with stolen trinkets and kits from the Twolegplace so she could become Medicine Cat.

How she got the Dog's tooth? Fighting. She was arguing with a rouge cat that happened to have allied two dogs with him. She beat the first one easily enough and took one of its teeth for Rabbitclaw, who was then Rabbitpaw, but the second dog was more of a challenge. It had watched her fight, and knew her strategy, so it was able to give her rather bad wounds, such as her ripped ear. She eventually killed the dog, and put one of its teeth through her ear, and the tooth from the other dog in to Rabbitpaw's ear.

    Roleplay example:

    Other:

 4 
 on: October 25, 2009, 01:32:25 pm 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
River Below (Billy Talent): Mello.

I'm sick and I'm twisted
I'm broken, you can't fix it
Don't make me, cause I'll do it
Red button and we'll all go

Into the river below...I'm running from the inferno...
They'll think I'm insane but you'll all know my name!
Into the river below...I'm running from the inferno...
I'll take all the blame, the front page and the fame!

 5 
 on: October 25, 2009, 01:30:50 pm 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
Hello (Evanesence): Matt.

Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping,
Hello, I'm still here,
All that's left of yesterday.

 6 
 on: October 25, 2009, 04:10:05 am 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
Fireflies (Owl city): Mello, Matt and OC.

You would not believe your eyes
If ten million Fireflies
Lit up the world as I fell asleep
'Cause they'd fill the open air
And leave teardrops everywhere
You'd think me rude
But I would just stand and stare!


 7 
 on: October 25, 2009, 04:03:34 am 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
One:
Fireflies (Owl city): Mello, Matt and OC.

Two:
The Letter (Hoobastank): Matt, Mello and OC.

Three:
River Below (Billy Talent): Mello.

That's what I've got.

 8 
 on: October 25, 2009, 04:01:17 am 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
Well, hi there, members! While looking for inspiration for fanfictions, Dark had a brilliant idea!

Basically, choose a topic (which I'll add to the list) and some songs (Which I'll add to the *other* list) and tell me. Then write a series of fanfics about your chosen topic, inspired by your songs. It's pretty simple, I would say.

TOPICS:
Dark's topic:
Death Note

SONGS:
Dark's songs:
Fireflies (Owl City.)
The Letter (Hoobastank.)
River Below (Billy Talent.)

 9 
 on: September 19, 2009, 03:45:46 am 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
As it is not an official Clan, MoonClan can do whatever they like, and don't have anything to do with the Warrior Code and have no Medicine Cat. Everything about StarClan, the Warrior Code and anything else should be omitted by cats of MoonClan, as any Cat is permitted to perform the ceremonies apart from Kits or Apprentices.

MoonClan joining ceremony:
If a cat from another Clan wishes to join MoonClan, they will first be held hostage for a while, then they will have to fight Darkheart. If they win, then the ceremony takes place. If not, they are sent back to their original Clan.

Warrior/Leader: From this day forward, you shall forsake everything that you have ever been told about StarClan and the Warrior Code, and if you die, you shall take your place in DeathClan. Do you understand?

Other cat(s): Yes. I forsake StarClan, the Warrior Code and all other lies and shall take my place in DeathClan when I die.

All cats: MoonClan or Death!

Other cat(s): MoonClan or death!

Leader/Warrior: I take your name ______/____paw and name you ______/_____paw. MoonClan welcome you as a full member.

Warrior ceremony:
When an apprentice has either been fully trained or has performed a great deed of bravery, then they are named as warriors. The prefix of the name stays the same, but the last part changes. The leader or a Warrior calls the Clan together, and then says the following speech:

Leader/Warrior: I, ______, call DeathClan to look down on these Apprentices and to give them their Warrior Names.

*Closes eyes.*

Leader/Warrior: ____paw, you shall become ______, by DeathClan's proclamation. Do you take your place amongst the warriors of DeathClan?

Apprentice(s): I do.

Leader/Warrior: At ______'s (Choose a cat in DeathClan) proclamation, you are now a full member of MoonClan. Now, if you return to _____Clan, you shall be killed.

All cats: MoonClan or death!

New warrior: MoonClan or death!

Deputy Ceremony:
Deputies can die, be exiled, or retire. Always before the next moonhigh, the leader appoints the new deputy. Here is the speech leaders must use:

Leader: I say these words before DeathClan, that the spirit(s) of [either the previous deputy or “our ancestors”] may hear and approve of my choice. The new deputy will be [warrior name].

All cats: MoonClan or death!

New deputy: MoonClan or death!

Leader: I now call upon ______ to spur the cats of MoonClan. Speak the words of DeathClan.

New deputy: As DeathClan spoke to cats in the past, they have spoken to me! Keep fighting, keep killing and take your places in DeathClan!

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 on: September 12, 2009, 03:46:42 am 
Started by Dark Mousy - Last post by Dark Mousy
Strike of MoonClan: The Plot.

Four will become two. Lion and Tiger will meet in battle and Blood will rule the forest.
StarClan's procpecy, delivered by Bluestar, The Darkest Hour, chapter 4.


Once, there were four Clans in the forest: ThunderClan, WindClan, RiverClan and ShadowClan. These Clans were lead by Firestar, Tallstar, Leopardstar and Tigerstar.

For a while, the Clans lived almost in harmony. But then, Tigerstar soon began to become jealous of the other three Clans, wanting the entire forest for himself. So he a cat from his Clan, Boulder, set of to TwolegPlace to speak with Scourge, the leader of BloodClan. Scourge agreed to help and ShadowClan and RiverClan joined up to form TigerClan, under the leadership of Tigerstar and Leopardstar.

But then, Tigerstar was killed by Scourge at a gathering. TigerClan’s leadership was taken over by Leopardstar for a huge war, which was eventually won by ThunderClan and WindClan, who had joined to become LionClan. The forest returned slowly to normal, Tigerstar’s old deputy, Blackfoot, taking over ShadowClan and Mistyfoot becoming the RiverClan deputy, despite being Half-Clan.

But, unknown to all the cats, Scourge had one Kit. This Kit came to ShadowClan and became known as Bloodkit. After her warrior ceremony, she became Bloodstorm, but was them told by her foster mother about her father. Bloodstorm ran to Fourtrees and there, she met up with a RiverClan cat, Darkclaw. They soon had two Kits, but one, the smaller, died. They named the other Dark-kit and he went on to become Darkpaw, then Darkheart. When he went to the HighStones, he met up with ShadowClan’s Medicine Cat, Bloodfang. When she heard about Scourge, Bloodfang quickly retired her position and became a warrior, leaving Medicine Cathood to her then apprentice, Crowpaw, who went on to become Crowpelt.

Very soon, Bloodfang and Darkheart had two Kits; Crowkit, and Dovekit. While Dovekit was less malevolent than her sisters, she still had killer potential. Rabbitclaw also had a Kit, Smokekit, with a cat from ThunderClan.

Then, something happened. Bloodfang got accused by ThunderClan of stealing a Kit, although she hadn’t. ShadowClan’s leader, Ravenstar, banished her, Rabbitclaw, her Kits, then only a moon old, and Darkheart. They came to the Moonstone, where Bloodfang was told by Tigerstar not to let any hostages out of her sight, and that MoonClan would rule the forest someday.

The cats then found somewhere safe to stay in HighStones, where MoonClan still live to this day in their camp.

However, a problem is now arising. Cats are going to Mothermouth but never returning. The leaders of the four other Clans are going together to the HighStones to find out what was happening. They never returned and were found dead a Moon later.

A scouting patrol of cats went to see what was going on and returned a Moon later, informing their Clanmates of MoonClan’s plot to take control of the entire forest. But they didn’t know that they were being followed. A small party of cats from MoonClan had been told by Bloodfang to tail them, and they did. They brought back the information that the four Clans were going to go to war and to destroy them.

Bloodfang was enraged. She went with Darkheart and Rabbitclaw and took all the kits from the four Clans hostage, but they were able to escape, thanks to the actions of a noble WindClan Warrior. MoonClan set off and killed nearly all of each Clan, although they have since recovered.

With MoonClan now enraged, the four other Clans have turned to StarClan for help. StarClan have sent down four cats, Riverstorm, who is now in RiverClan, Thunderstream, who is in ThunderClan, Blowingwind of WindClan and Shadow-wing of ShadowClan. These four cats will lead the cats of the Clans to victory, they hope. But DeathClan, where evil cats go when they die, have sent MoonClan a cat to help them. Moonshadow; the most dangerous of the special cats.

So, what will you do? Will you join Rivermist, Thunderclap, Blowingwind and Shadowrush, or will you side with Moonshadow and Bloodfang? You shall decide.

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